Resume Strategy – Practical Exercise

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Foundation — Month 3

Career Positioning • Résumé Strategy — Practical Exercise

Rewrite Your Five Strongest Résumé Bullets — With Real Impact

Career Positioning — Practical Exercise

This week’s deep dive made the case that a résumé isn’t a job history — it’s an argument for your future. The most powerful way to make that argument is through bullets that lead with impact: specific, concrete, result-focused descriptions of what changed because you were there. This exercise takes that idea directly into your actual résumé. You’ll identify your five strongest bullets, assess whether they’re working, and rewrite each one to lead with the outcome rather than the task. By the end, you’ll have five high-quality, evidence-based bullets ready to carry into tailored applications — and a reusable approach you can apply to the rest of your résumé on your own.

The Exercise

  1. Open your current résumé and choose five bullets — Pick the five that represent your most significant contributions — the work you’re proudest of, the results that had real impact, or the experiences most relevant to the roles you’re currently targeting. These don’t have to be your most impressive-sounding bullets. They should be the ones where you actually know what happened and what the result was.
  2. Diagnose each bullet — For each of the five, ask three questions: Does it start with a strong action verb (not “responsible for” or “helped with”)? Does it say what I actually did, not just what my role was? Does it include a result, outcome, or measurable impact? For each bullet, note which of these three elements is missing or weak. That’s your rewrite target.
  3. Find the result you haven’t written yet — For each bullet that lacks a result, think back: what actually happened? Did something improve, speed up, increase, decrease, get built, get saved? Can you quantify it — even approximately? “Reduced processing time by roughly 40%” is better than no number, and honesty about approximation is appropriate. If you genuinely can’t quantify it, think about how to describe the outcome in concrete terms: what changed for the team, the client, the product, or the organization?
  4. Rewrite each bullet using the formula — Use this structure: strong action verb + what you did + the result or scale. Example: “Managed social media accounts” becomes “Grew Instagram following from 4,200 to 11,000 in eight months by redesigning content strategy and introducing a weekly video series.” Write your new version, then read it aloud. Does it sound like something you’d be proud to say in an interview? If yes, keep it. If it still feels generic, tighten it further.
  5. Do a before-and-after check — Lay your original five bullets alongside your five rewrites. For each pair, ask: which one better answers the question “what did this person accomplish here?” If your rewrite is clearly stronger, you’re done. If they feel similar, the original might have had more impact than you thought — or your rewrite needs another pass to get more specific.

What to Do Next

Work through the rest of your résumé bullets using the same diagnostic and rewrite process. Prioritize the roles most relevant to your current target. Once your core bullets are strong, revisit your summary statement — now that your bullets are more impact-focused, your summary should match that standard. A résumé where every element is working toward the same argument is significantly more persuasive than one where some elements are strong and others are filler.

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You are a career coach and résumé strategist who helps adults rewrite their résumé bullets to lead with impact rather than responsibility. You give direct, specific, honest feedback and help people find the results hiding inside their experience. I want to rewrite my résumé bullets so they show what I actually accomplished, not just what I was responsible for. Ask me these questions one at a time, waiting for my answer before continuing: 1. Tell me about the role you want to work on first — what was the job title, roughly how long did you hold it, and what was the organization or industry? 2. Share one or two of your current bullets for that role. I’ll give you feedback before we move to the next ones. 3. For each bullet you share: What actually happened as a result of your work? What got better, faster, bigger, cheaper, or stronger? Even an approximate number or a clear description of the outcome is valuable. After each bullet, give me: (a) an honest assessment of what’s strong and what’s missing, (b) one or two rewritten versions using the formula “strong action verb + what you did + the result or scale,” and (c) a brief note on why the rewrite is stronger. Work through as many bullets as the user shares, giving the same structured feedback each time. After all bullets are done, summarize the one pattern I should watch for across the rest of my résumé.

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